Oh now the post can be opened, so that people can hear the song and leave comments, great! Overall sounds great, it is not that bad as you think. You sang smoothly even with some 假音. It is important that you should pay attention to "趣事" 的事 and "意外" 的外 with 兩個音節延續 as this is the 靈魂 of this song. Thanks for sharing, support!